Thursday, November 17, 2016

Jordan and John: Robin Williams

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First, write about something well done.  What did you learn from this group?  What part of the Presentation seemed the best?  Be specific, and use a specific example from the Presentation and your notes.

Second, offer constructive criticism that would help this group. What might have been more clear?  What part of the Presentation seemed the least polished?  Be specific.

10 comments:

  1. You guys did a phenomenal job. I learn a little more about Robin Williams and his illness he had which was DLB. Honestly the whole presentation was FANTASTIC. I loved that you guys were entertaining, and had enthusiasm through out your presentation. Being able to make people laugh is a great way to get peoples attention. I have no constructive criticism you guys did a Great Job!!

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  2. You guys did an amazing job creating an original, entertaining, and personal presentation. I loved how you both shared his influence to you personally. I did not know Robin Williams was in Aladdin. I also did not know he had DLB, so I learned a lot from your presentation! You both were well informed on the topic and enthusiastic about Robin Williams. I also loved the quote you guys integrated into your presentation. It's very difficult to find a criticism, but I was unsure of his impact on youth throughout the presentation which is an important component of the presentation. I may have missed it!

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  3. You guys did a fantastic job of using different and creative ways to keep the audience engaged. Your unique way of presenting really felt as if you were trying to embody Robin Williams in the presentation, which I feel is really cool. One thing that I say could be better is your use of context. Many of the creative risks that you took assumed that the audience had context or already knew all the works of Robin Williams. For the future, it would help to explain everything in your presentation, so the audience isn't left to assume anything.

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  4. You guys did a great job I really enjoyed your presentation. There was lots of comedy which kept us paying attention to the slides. I learned that he has a creative mind to be able to play all the roles that he did. You should add more context on people such as the BO Burnham i had no idea who he was so it was kinda hard to follow along during that point in the presentation.

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  5. You guys did so well, I learned so much about Robin Williams. Love how you added the comedy part in it really made the entire presentation. I would recommend adding more context because I honestly had no idea who BO Burnham was and you didn't explain much about him.

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  6. amazing job on keeping everyone engaged the entire time it was very original and entertaining. i never knew he suffered from his disease that he had. the only thing i could find that lacked was your explanation of the other person in the comparison besides that it was phenomenal!

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  7. Robin Williams was one of my favorite actors growing up. i never knew that he was diagnosed with DLB. i really enjoyed your presentation but i felt like you should have compared him to someone who is a little more well known.

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  8. The introduction was so cheesy, yet it was great! You both did a fantastic job of telling us about Robin Williams and the influence he has had on us. The only thing I would suggest would have been to give more back ground on who Bo Burnham was, as I had never heard of him.

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  9. This was a great presentation. I honestly grew up watching him in films and loved all of them. It was really sad to watch the news of him passing away. It made my parents upset because they loved watching him in films also. I think you guys could have made more eye contact with everyone.

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  10. This was a great and funny presentation. You guys kept us entertained the whole time and gave us all great information about Robin Williams. I can't really think of anything wrong with your presentation because it was so good but when you compared him to Bo Burnham you could have gave us info on him because i don't know who that is. but overall good job!!

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