Tuesday, November 22, 2016

Jack and Miranda: Jack Hanna

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9 comments:

  1. enjoyed the information about st. judes i never knew that and you covered it pretty well. you possibly could have covered the expansion of the zoo a little better.

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  2. I liked how you tied in that Jack had a daughter and raised a lot of money for St. Jude. I never knew he had a daughter, or that he helped expand the Columbus Zoo. Its amazing how one person could change so many things.

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  3. I think that your power point was pretty good with information about Jack. I like how you included information about his daughter with leukemia cancer and that is why he took the job in Columbus at the Zoo.I wish you guys would have talked a little louder I had a hard time hearing you talk.

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  4. Great presentation, you had good information on him. I wasn't aware he took the job in Ohio because of his daughter having cancer. He definitely attracts more people to come out to the zoo. I don't have any constructive criticism, you did so well.

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  5. Great information on who Jack Hannah was, I didn't know who he was until your presentation. You guys could have talked more about the Columbus Zoo, but overall good job.

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  6. I like this guy's perspective on animals in the zoo. I think you two did an excellent job of describing his passion and I like the active display on your presentation. One interesting fact that you brought up was the case of Harambe. I would have thought he would be against what happened seeing as to how he loves animals so much. But then, you explained how he viewed it, and it made sense. The only issue I would say is Jack needs to speak up a bit more with confidence. You have a voice and you need to share it with the world.

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  7. I thought the presentation as a whole you guys did a great job! I never knew that a big reason why he came was because of his daughter having cancer. The only thing I would say was to just be a little bit more louder, it was kind of heard to hear you guys talk at times.

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  8. Great presentation! I have definitely realized how much more people go to the zoo nowadays. I live next to it and traffic has become horrible. I did not know that it grew as drastically as you two explained! I would have loved to hear you speak a little louder and always be confident when giving presentations.

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  9. I enjoyed how thorough you were when explaining everything about Jack Hanna. You did a good job of setting the scene and letting the audience know about Jack Hanna. One thing that could be added to the presentation is the explanation of his effects on culture. You spent a lot of time showing who Jack is and what he has done, but not much time elaborating on how he as a person has specifically changed our culture.

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