Thursday, August 25, 2016

Journal two Payden

 Journal two Payden

Hi I am Payden Fultz and I am a Marysville High School graduate of 2016. I have been a competitive cheerleader since the first grade, I have cheered at multiple gyms including Midwest, Step One and Matrix. I did broke both my ankles at the same time trying to learn a new skill. I am majoring in Pharmaceutical representative.

I like how Cisneros brings in her senses of smell to the book when she talk about how her mothers hair is sweet to put her nose into when she told her she says it smells like bread before you bake it.  i also like how she uses imagery with her moms hair and h ow she explains t hat it  looks like little rosettes and little candy circles.

2 comments:

  1. I like how she did use sense of smell describing the way her mother hair smells and how you could imagine they way her hair would look like little rosettes.

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  2. I agree. I also like how the sense of smell was brought into the book, it was very interesting and unique.

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