Composition for the modern world at OSU-Marion
Regan, it's so cool how you used dialogue between you and your Mom when you were begging to be a waitress, and you also used idioms (bun in the oven!), metaphors (like a tape stuck on repeat) and lots of characterization for all the cast of family characters. The best was the contrast between your nearly-fistfighting Uncles! Nice work and good revision. You have really improved and your voice is strong here. Thank you.
Thank you Mr.Lohre! I loved your class and you have taught me many things I will carry on throughout my college years! Thank you!
My pleasure, Regan. Have a great break, and please stay in touch. Mike
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