First, write about something well done. What did you learn from this group? What part of the Presentation seemed the best? Be specific, and use a specific example from the Presentation and your notes.
Second, offer constructive criticism that would help this group. What might have been more clear? What part of the Presentation seemed the least polished? Be specific.
You guys did a wonderful job. I love the tittle of your first slide which was "Kanye: Everyone loves him. Even himself" that was very creative. I learn that Kanye loves himself a lot and I mean a lot also that he collaborated with Adidas for his shoes called YEEZYS. I really liked where you both talked about and compared Kanye with Dr. Dre and how they both are producers and songwriters. I don't really have any constructive criticism because I think that you did a TREMENDOUS Job!!
ReplyDeleteI thought you guys both did a great job of attacking everything that Kanye does like fashon and music and even his thought of running for president in 2020. The only part I could think of that could have been more polished was when you guys talked about what made Kanye, Kanye.
ReplyDeleteYou presentation was very interesting. I really liked at the beginning how you guys described who he was, it had a sense of humor to it. You kept the slides entertaining throughout the whole presentation. I learned a lot about who Kayne is. You could maybe make your handout a little bit more detailed and easier to follow.
ReplyDeleteYour presentation was very good, before I didn't know much about Kayne other than he was a rap singer. Found it fascinating that people who doesn't necessarily like him still listen to his music. I don't have any constructive criticism because you did so well. :)
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed how you went into detail describing Kanye's personality and you seemed like advertisers, and also I never knew how self-centered he was. "I love Kanye," is a song he created. I gotta say i'm impressed. One thing is maybe you could have shared his more popular song lyrics?
ReplyDeleteI thought your guys title was great! Both of you presented very well and seemed to memorize everything you needed to know. i like the style and way the presentation went. The only thing I would suggest is maybe a stronger conclusion or wrap up of your topic.
ReplyDeletei really enjoyed this presentation. i learned that kanye has only released 7 albums and that amazes me because i thought he would have had more by now. overall i didnt find anything wrong with your presentation.
ReplyDeleteThe thought process going into this was amazing and so clever. i only really know what the media says about kanye and you guys helped build on to the view i perceived of him couldn't really find anything wrong!
ReplyDeleteI loved your presentation, it was unique. I loved how you started going back and fourth saying icon, role model, singer, etc. It really made the presentation fun and easy to listen to. I think you should have brought up his fighting with other artists.
ReplyDeleteyour presentation was very good and entertaining and fun to listen to. I really liked your title and how you talked about Kayne's personality. I didn't really see anything wrong with the presentation good job!
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