Shaylee Campbell
Journal 5: Cisneros, and Role Models
The story I chose was The Earl of Tennessee on page 70,
and 71. This story stands out to me because it is different. Everyone has that
one weird neighbor, that doesn’t show their face that much, that you always
wonder about. You always want to know their life but they stay hidden from the
world, and come out at odd times during the day. The themes that are important
in this story is that Earl likes to stay hidden and in the shadows. He likes to
come out at night, and stay in his house all day. It kind of seems like he
doesn’t like being around others that much. Language and writing is at its best
when talking about the dogs Earl owns, “He has two little black dogs that go
everywhere with him. They don’t walk like ordinary dogs, they leap and
somersault like an apostrophe and comma.” I think that simile Cisneros uses is
cool because you wouldn’t normally think of relating a dog to an apostrophe.
A lady named Mrs. Sears who lived down the block from me.
She was older like 75+ about 5’2, not fat, but definitely not skinny. She had big, curly, red hair, grandma glasses, and bright red cheeks. She had really
bad knees that eventually got replaced. She smelled like cigarette butts and
vodka with Coke. She also had two little yorkies, Muffy and Holly. My sisters
and I adored Mrs. Sears and her dogs. We loved hanging out with her and walking
her dogs. During the days of the week after school we would go to her house and
play scrabble or watch the news with her, and sometimes make her dinner. She
was like an adoptive grandma to us, and was closer to us than our actual
grandparents. Mrs. Sears had a huge influence on our lives. She taught us how
to play cards, and scrabble. She also taught us that being a widow had its ups
and downs. She learned how to be independent and strong, but she also fought
depression and drank to get away from life. She helped me see how much I love
dogs. She made my behavior better in front of people. She taught me manners,
and good study habits. She always bugged me to do my homework while I was over,
so I could keep my grades up.
That's so interesting to me that you got so close with your neighbor, I kind of had an old lady in my neighborhood when I was little that I bonded with like this.
ReplyDeleteI liked your story a lot. It's always good to have a positive influence in your life. The writing in your quote is really unique as well.
ReplyDeleteI liked your story a lot. It's always good to have a positive influence in your life. The writing in your quote is really unique as well.
ReplyDeleteReally good job on the description of mrs. sears i could really picture her in my head with what details you gave me.
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