tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5432868437361131298.post1087713675059661025..comments2016-12-10T21:09:59.061-08:00Comments on Writing to Learn and Share in English 1109: Shaylee and Evan: Steve JobsMike Lohrehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05832313501793243606noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5432868437361131298.post-72854474383149555572016-11-22T09:18:38.041-08:002016-11-22T09:18:38.041-08:00This presentation had many interesting points abou...This presentation had many interesting points about Steve Jobs. I particularly liked the ones about his affair with adobe and his choice not to try and overcome his cancer. However, a lot of this presentation felt like it was more about Apple as a company rather than about Steve Jobs himself. Other times it did feel as if you were reading straight off the powerpoint. Nevertheless, you both still did a great job. Max Baldersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14346803625298143226noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5432868437361131298.post-49951970010125154872016-11-22T09:17:21.264-08:002016-11-22T09:17:21.264-08:00I liked how you guys covered all of his inventions...I liked how you guys covered all of his inventions, and things he had created for us. The comparison with Tesla was spot on. The only thing I would suggest would be you guys could have sped up the presentation instead of saying things multiple times.Mirandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09332569066605934349noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5432868437361131298.post-21166773113999150732016-11-22T09:13:51.626-08:002016-11-22T09:13:51.626-08:00You guys did very good, I learned so much about St...You guys did very good, I learned so much about Steve jobs and what he did. It's crazy to me that he refused to be cured of cancer. I thought it was a little bit long.keirra_xohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11276609826511526542noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5432868437361131298.post-58443314770422707472016-11-22T09:11:11.638-08:002016-11-22T09:11:11.638-08:00I think your presentation was very good all around...I think your presentation was very good all around. You guys did a great job explaining what everything was and how it was used in today's society. You had lots of intresting facts about him and his work which really kept you presntation intresting. I thought you could have talked a little bit more about who Steve Job in case someone didn't know who he wasPayden Fultzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17602561742202326724noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5432868437361131298.post-31736841879929561822016-11-22T09:08:37.315-08:002016-11-22T09:08:37.315-08:00You guys did a great job! I found it compelling th...You guys did a great job! I found it compelling that when he dropped out of college he snuck into classes to get the information needed to create his business. You were very well informed on your topic and he had a huge influence on youth. Emma Kleinknechthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04451410890026777449noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5432868437361131298.post-8367423907358903112016-11-22T09:06:36.265-08:002016-11-22T09:06:36.265-08:00You guys did an Amazing job on explaining Steve Jo...You guys did an Amazing job on explaining Steve Jobs. I liked how you guys listed all the inventons and explained them. Good use in context and also great job on talking about his cancer. You did an amazing job. Jussetthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09801341883572572790noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5432868437361131298.post-19067828425250694762016-11-22T09:06:04.560-08:002016-11-22T09:06:04.560-08:00i cant believe that Apple shares went from being $...i cant believe that Apple shares went from being $9 to over $300 that is just incredible to me. i learned alot of things as i listened to your presentation.<br />but maybe you could compare him to someone else who is better known.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14167008275233871645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5432868437361131298.post-69518568437611844872016-11-22T09:05:46.540-08:002016-11-22T09:05:46.540-08:00I enjoyed the presentation, and I never knew that ...I enjoyed the presentation, and I never knew that Jobs was diagnosed with Pancreatic cancer. I find it astonishing that he would shrug off the doctor's orders which had very serious consequences. I remember you mentioned that he got a liver transplant, but I don't remember you stating who specifically gave it to him. Jordan Kightlingerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15521789447271746291noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5432868437361131298.post-75355216233138773812016-11-22T09:05:09.458-08:002016-11-22T09:05:09.458-08:00I liked the facts that you gave about him. Like I ...I liked the facts that you gave about him. Like I didn't know that he ripped off his friend and bussiness partner of thousands of dollars. I would say that it felt like it was a little too long to keep me interested the entire time.John Spanglerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03548761660522643923noreply@blogger.com